Hey neo, that was good.
I loved the way you wrote this part:

When tears fall in darkest hours,
when rains of stress comes in showers.
Whatever matters,
when hope shatters,

you're talented. keep it up.
take care,
marjan

This is really goood!
great job!

Neo, I love this poem! You have alot of talent. Cover the huge diverse sky
I know I can do, I can fly. This part I loved. You can do anything if you want it and strife for it. Great job!