by Steven Beesley Nov 25, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Cast out: |
by Simon Hayes
Nice work, you never cease to write anything lesser than brilliant!! A captuing piece, dark and mysterious :) |
by Jacklyn
Creapy! but yet i still love it! the first part i thought was really grabbing and brought you into the poem, i could easily picture things from discription and the emotion was great! great dark poem! |
by Darien
That poem sent chills down my spine. Very nice use of words, and emotion. Those two combined write really good poems. |
This is a decent piece, I see you handle free verse as well as formal.Excellent use of language in this one yet still strongly conveying the emotion of the subject.Very well written. |