This is a decent piece, I see you handle free verse as well as formal.Excellent use of language in this one yet still strongly conveying the emotion of the subject.Very well written.

That poem sent chills down my spine. Very nice use of words, and emotion. Those two combined write really good poems.

Creapy! but yet i still love it! the first part i thought was really grabbing and brought you into the poem, i could easily picture things from discription and the emotion was great! great dark poem!

~Jacklyn

Nice work, you never cease to write anything lesser than brilliant!! A captuing piece, dark and mysterious :)

Another great write...

Simon