Hey kevin, that was really excellent.
you express your feelings really well.
hope everything goes well for you.
take care,
marjan

Hey nice work, you should write more, i have a poem like this one but i don't think its as good. good job i liked it. sorry you are going through that right now though. read some of mine if you don't mind.

HEY!..wow..that was very good...i feel the same way as you right now...it does hurt..write more, your awsome!!!

Wats ur screen name?..get back at me when u can

This is excellent i really like it its deep keep it up king metal head AKA sebastian

Wow. your words are strong and so deep. your feeling are so great and i love that about your poem. Keep up the good work!!
Heather

I love this poem it is really good. It is very well written, the words just grab you and make you read the whole thing and pay good attention. It has passion and meaning. It is an awesome peom ill vote and definitely a 5/5 so keep up the good work and keep it real!
Nikki

Thats really good but i dont get what the A's ?'s and cent signs are. but i really liked it

Wow, this is a beautiful poem. i like it alot

Hey that's really well written, I read it twice and the only complaint I have is the random symbols -it's a lil distracting. But it's very well written though and you express nicely. Well done :)

:) good jjobb!!!

Fantastic poem..keep it up!

First of all... I think you should edit the funky characters that this site adds... Other than that... the flow was very good, I really liked it, and I can relate a lot too... but this poem touched me... My favorite part was the beginning... it had PERFECT flow and it was beautiful! I wish you the best of luck... Great poem, keep writing!

~BJ~