Seeing as you commented on one of my poems i thought id check out yours..
Thank god i did!
You have an unimaginable amount of talent that some people wouldnt be able to see in such a short , neat poem..But i like this poem inparticular because of its .. shortness >< .. Im crap at writing comments so ill leave it at this.. Great stuff 10/10 (well 5/5).. keep it up .. .lestat.
Seeing as "nostalgia" is just about my fav word, and u are a well-extablished poet over here, that reli caught my eye
i havent been visiting here that often lately..
anyway, this poem was just amazing.. im surprised u havent been getting that many reviews..
incredible emotion and GOD its short, but so expressive.. i loved the imagery, and thnk God i stopped seeing rhyme as necessary a loong time ago :)
ur first stanza was just breath-taking.. this is explicitly how i feel almost all the time.. thnk you for writing out what i had in mind all this time :) im sure i cudnt hv put it better or more precisely..
thank you for sharing
keep up the talent
5/5, blindly
take care
NannO