Awwww
babe plz dont let it happen cuz im going with you,i need you,i need theses to be only feeings

I know how it feels, to feel that u want to die, that there is no way out of your world, that there is know light at the end of the road, but there is, i am one who has seen it , you have to remember to keep the ones you love close and remember that they need u... think about that..
robyn

Kinda short, but yeah I thought it was good with the whole demon idea in it. It's depressing when you write poems like these, I hope things get better
well done hun xox

Wow very nice and I hope everyting does work out take care--RAchel--

I hope that you make it through this, I know how hard it can be to resist ending it all but live in hope. You have great talent and from previous comments a lot of people would miss you. You will find your way, be strong, and never let anyone get the best of you. There is a place for you in this world, and you will find it if you hold on.
Best wishes,
*VioletRaven*

I commented another poem of yours and said, the ideas and so on were good, but the poem wasn't that good. I loved this poem though and therefore you deserve a 5/5