Hi Buddy!
somehow before reading "WORDS" i had a sight of no. of comments u hv recd so far and the votes & was amazed as 157 members hv visited it before me.
then after going thro the same i realized something:
when u r writing long...u hv to make sure that it builds that interest in reader..mostly teens come to visit this site and though the theme u wrote abt is so good...but the length and the way it was written lacked that required bond. it was more of an article rather than poem...u hv writeen some great poems & even this one cud hv been good..but somehow didnt.

"just my feelings"

take care

Dear Nitin,

Firstly thanks for reading my poem and secondly thanks for commenting.

It is true that this poem lacks something, what even I am not sure. I had stopped writing for about an year due to well. er.... some misunderstandings. but I am trying to write again these days, whenever I can find time.

This was my first attempt at writing again after an year and truly does not have the quality of my other works. I know that, but apart from that I do not write for other\'s apprisal.... I prefer a lot of criticism and experimenting. I must agree that this was not a successful experiment though.

Thank you very much for being true and sharing what you felt about my poems.