Greta poem/song...very nicely written, glad to be the first to comment/rate on it...lovely piece of work...keep it up and all the best

Loved it. I'm writing songs, too. Corny songs but yeah heh. Keep on writing! *Props*

-Jin

Word up I like your style.

Great poem/song. i like it a lot

Wow..... that is so good. That was really good. You are an amazing writer... I'm adding you to my favourites.

Wow! Thank you guys! I never thought I'd get this much positive feedback. This is actually my first piece ever written (except for those which were immediately thrown in the trash)! It really means a lot to me! Thanks!

Hey Alex.

Dat was a brilliant one !!

Hey alex,
Can u please update your email address.

WOW, that was really really good! hits me right in the heart. great job:)

Damn, intense! But extremely good..
I like =)

Wow... pretty cool... different but well written... keep it up...

sammie

Wow i really like this poem..thanxs for the comment on my poem..keep up the great work

Good work,there was lots of emotion in this poem.

I like your stuff. . .* Kepp up the great work :)

How often have I had these feelings that you have described. You have painted a good picture here.

--Sher

Amazing job. i love the way you use Red Ink in almost everything. It's kinda true also though this is very deep and soul feeding i would have to say because everyone uses "Red Ink" once in a while, once, keeps doing it. It can go on and on. maybe i don't make any sense but that's what i think keep it up. keep on writing love always and forever.

Wow... intense wrting but very well thought out and well written!.. its was like you were painting a picture very well described loved it =) very dark indeed lol :P keep it up =) awesome song/poem.

--emotionless19

Whoa... alot of emotions in this poem. good work. i really like the way you used red ink through out the poem. again, nice job.

Street Toyz Chick!!!

Yay! I just wrote some music to this song and recorded it! It was really fun cuz this is my first song and it turned out pretty cool too :)

Hey, i read the comment from you so i came to check out yours, and like you said about mine, it's like you took the words right out of my mouth, mind, and heart. great job loved it.