Another good poem...
Keep on writing,ill read them from above..
Much love 4ya...
alex aka kly style

Julie, awsome poem. I loved it. I want to share a moment like that with a girl. Those kinds of moments in life seem to be the most in joyable, when you are loving someone and someone is loving you in return. Anyways good job, keep it up.

Love ya,
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

I agree with you, so would I.. Very nicely written deserves nothing but a 5/5.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Your work is fine although it began to get a bit choppy,other than that you have talent for sure