Wow its really good.....well done
if you get some time please check my poems and vote & comment on them XoXo NiCoLe

Mana im jealous lol, this poem is really good, grr i have been like having writers block lately and cant write anything good for the life of me but oh well atleast you can lol

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I really can relate to this poem, you did an amazing job writing it!!