Fantastic poem, you did a great job at expressing your emotions! Amazing poem!

A girl loves attention from a guy she loves! the poem is really cute, it makes you feel happy and free from just the joy of hearing it.
~ my poem... well i'll start off saying i deff started writing it a while ago. well i found it the other day not finished so i finished it. the poem is more about a sort of dark source that is in relation to me.. all of the bad influences and temptations in my life. they find no importance in me and kind of think of me as invisible. they know im there but they don't acnoledge it. like im not in their life but i am. thats y im not known. but im there with them and when i am im not alone bc i have Jesus.they want me to be miserable they use me. take my sences away. its like a demon.. the devil - if you read stanza three. they want me to remember everything bad about my life. its really confusing. hard to explain hope i got my ... veiw across. thanks for commenting and asking!

If you've been reading my poems this is how I feaLt for that girl Laura But then (this is going to be pretty long) one day I inved some people to my house so we could all chill and this is after the fact I told Laura I liked her she started flurting with one of my really good friends.She did it in my face and also at my house> Personally I think your not suppose to do that. Thats just playing mean. But she did it to me anyways. The writes me a note a week later and says I'm sorry... Well I'll just let you read my poems.. But anyways this poem was really good 5/5 Read the ones I've recently done and the one called Laura... Well thx Later...