Farewell to Mr.Perfect

by YoungMynd   Nov 25, 2005


What I need is you right now and not those fancy things

Don't need your money or those glamorous diamond rings

You're too good for me and sometimes I think I need less

Cuz I'm only 14 and you've given me the best

We socialize better than all the young couples our age

But I feel you're on the 10th chapter and I'm only on the 10th page

You're a perfectionist in everything and I'm looking for a little defection

And It's kind of hard to say this since I was your first selection

But your flawless style have made me feel so small

Everybody thinks we're the perfect couple, but they don't know it all

Being with you have been so challenging, your ways are up too high

People are gonna think I'm stupid for this, but I gotta say goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    That is sooo true. I love it. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by shan

    I thin of my love when i read this....she thinks the same...but i didnt like the ending....don't ever leave sumone u love...things get okay....think it over...ur poems r quite touching...good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    That was beautiful, but kinda sad at the end too

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow....That poem is awesome. Its one of them poems u read and as ur reading it your thinking in ur head "hmmm are you sure they wrote that" lol just kidding I know you wrote it and it was fantastic keep it up 5/5
    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Aw, thats so cute. keep it up! 5/5