Wow... you are very talented!! This poem was very unique and I loved every line of it. Fantastic work!

Aw, thats so cute. keep it up! 5/5

Wow....That poem is awesome. Its one of them poems u read and as ur reading it your thinking in ur head "hmmm are you sure they wrote that" lol just kidding I know you wrote it and it was fantastic keep it up 5/5
~Jessica

That was beautiful, but kinda sad at the end too

I thin of my love when i read this....she thinks the same...but i didnt like the ending....don't ever leave sumone u love...things get okay....think it over...ur poems r quite touching...good job

That is sooo true. I love it. <3