Very good, it sounds so real....!-xxx-

Awww!! I love this poem. Kinda sad/dark...well written!! When i was reading it, i could picture the girl with the gun in her hand. A lot of effort put into this one. I like the last stanza expecially. well done once again Mona.
Rosie xXx

Wow Mona...that is so good...I really love that poem...it really makes you think! Awesome as always!

Wow.....mona...this is just amazing!!!
So dark and yet there's hate and i get the feeling that she's trying to prove a point.....wow
well done sweetie pie
love ya lotsssssss and lotsssss like jelly-tots xxxxxx

That was really atmospheric, you can almost feel the passion and feeling pulsing thru in the rhthym and the wrds. wel dun!

Wow... pretty dark stuff.. lykd ur work on this one.. never read a poem from that point of view b4, lyk that the writer actually is lyk the antagonist..
gud luck with the rest
take care
NannO

WOw... once again great work... i like the way you wrote this... i know how it feels to feel like you have to prove to ppl that u dont love sumone u shoodnt... i dated sumone my friends hated for 8 months lol.... bye 5/5!! ***

This poem is awesome, and I don't rally have anything to say except...

I think at the very beginning,
The repeated word:
She
She
She
I think that could change to something else because it would just make the poem sound better in my opinion..
Wow, what a crappy comment. Great poem, keep up the good work.