You write like my friend Jay, I like his poetry( i would never tell him that though :)) and I like yours too

Aw wow, This is amazing, I can so relate to this right now, I love a certain someone but at thesame time I hate him, very well done, touching poem hun you have talent & you gotta keep on writing hehe, take care

0h g0od j0b darl. keep it up

Wow...incredible... I can relate to this so much. You did a fantastic job with this hun! Keep up the great work!

Yeah i wonder the same things too...but when its all said and done u just fall in love with them ...well u don't know why...u just do...keep up the great job...5/5

Your hate is so beautiful. :)

Cute poem. and i guess it's a way of defending yourself from getting your heart broken from something that seems so perfect. lots of people do it. nicely written. take care.

-PG-

Thats alot like how i've been feeling for a YEAR. I finally think everything between me n him will be fine now {as long as i dont try hitting him with a pipe again lol} This is a really great poem.

Nice poem.....you hate the person because you fell inlove?

Excellent poem! I can completely relate to your poem! Great job!

Bravo

Thank you for commenting on my poem. I love yours, it moves me. I cant explain it haha. anyways thanks.

You write kind of like my friend raven except her "i hate you" poem was about her father.... its really sad but REALLY good keep up the great work... ohh and comment on some of mine if ya would thanks xoxo

Kind of like d poem in 10 things i h8 abwt u but better!!!! xxxx

Lol
nice poem man ;)
keep it up
Lov
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I kno how u feel ...its no fun....i think time is tha only cure for sumthin like this...gud luck stay up and keep writing like that

Nice.. it kinda reminded me of the poem in "10 things I hate about you" nice job though

Wow.. I am in this exact place.. great job..

Nice poem.

i know how you feel...

5/5

Aww! That's cute!