That's really good, just remember sometimes the people you give yourself to aren't ready to have you:) keep up the good work:)

I like it
especially the end and the half universe thing

This is really a great poem! But remember, if you have to change just to get someone to like you, then that person isn't worth liking!

Great job on the poem. Keep it up!

x.xBrokenx.x

I agree with Broken.. it's a good poem, keep it up!!

xox

--ally

Wow... 5/5, I like the way it's written. I'm speechless at what to say about it though lol. It's a GREAT poem!

Awww this is really good- keep up the good work!

I love it

I just found a new hero, If these emotions are capable to hide with in a male, you found your self a host, great work

5/5 could def relate

Great poem!

Really good, i loved it. prefect