Good poem. =] Thanks for the comment & vote. Take care.

Omg! Such a beautiful and wellwritten poem. It was very sad though... if you ever need someone to talk to I'm always here, okay!?

This is a beautiful poem. I really like how it flows. Hey and thanks for commenting on my poem. Sorry it took so long to get back to you. You can talk to me if u need me.

I really like this.
Even though it is so short, it is filled with depth and emotion behind the words.
Flow is good throughout, and the ending is beautifully done, very intense.