Great rhyming pattern, and a very strong emotional poem. Fantastic job!

That was so beautiful!! u have a nice flow. keep it up! ill put u as my favourite so i can check more out when u put em on. peace,
dani xoxo

I like your poem...really unique 5/5 Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

Amazingly written.
5/5

WOW!!!!!!!!! Very touching..... I think I am goin to read more..... 5/5

OMG im touched! its wonderful! def 5/5!

5/5 GREAT JOB!. Damn good flow and tells a great story. awesome...

OMG, this poem was so very well done! You're awesome at this ^_~ I could so relate to this! Thanks for givin' me the oppurtunity to read it! Keep it up

Corey that was so sweet!And great and I luved reading every second of it!5/5

luves,
Luves4eva

Hey, you r very great at writing and keep it up this poem shows a lot of feeling

What a great job! i love it! i love the way you made the words work together...

I really like this poem :P it shows your not just trying to ryhme words its like you really meant it, your insights a gift :)

Very nice...well put together. i really like this one

This made me want to cry...it's very well written, and sweet....i like it

Wow great poem.......i like poems with a good flow EXCELLENT...... xoxo keep up the good work

Omg...i love this.im like crying!!! this is so emotional and ...it's AWESOME!!!!!um...im speechles.5/5