Dying Sun:-

by Neo Castelino   Nov 26, 2005


Moments which you kill everytime,
Are so much precious for me.
Do not die sun stay back,
Just for a while just few minutes.
Let me finish off my lines,
So that events last forever.
Show me your incandescence,
So that I can find my path.
My forsaken soul gets boggled up,
Whenever you leave me behind.
Matter you think are extenuate,
Are very much morass for me.
You even kill my friend,
Dear friend shadow to make me alone.
Distances may be extreme,
But I can hear your silent promise.
To come back and help out,
So that I can retrace my lines.
Wait for me dying sun stay back,
Just for a while just few minutes..

Always by Neo.

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  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Wow that is ril beautiful iv never read anything like it you have a talent
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    First of all, I'd like to thank ya for the comment :) N cool you live in Spain, been there twice n luv it.
    The poem was wonderful, not much to say except 5/5.
    ~Br0k3n

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Neo, very good writiing! I really enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Acheebabe

    Wow that was like really awesome!!!i loved it! it must be kinda cool though livin in spain!!email me sometime!!
    blinkobsesser182@yahoo.com
    XOXO
    Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was beautifully written neo.
    I loved the way you wrote it. you did
    a really great job on it. that was relly unique. I enjoyed reading each line
    of it neo. keep it up.
    much love,
    marjan

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