Well, the good hopefuly will win i think u neeed to take the advice and never give up ang keep on fighting because it is worth it. soz i havn't wrote ages but been busy.

Wow rainy! unique poem, the end surprised me i love your perspective!

I see two sides fighting
For the better half of me

excellent write! And you've already got more than 200 poems! sorry i cant comment on all of them is hard to keep up! i cant believe you've already beaten me...i guess i better catch up with my writing...whew just thinkin about it makes me tired;) keep it up rainy, luv ya ur awesum.

I loved it...i liked the end...
I see two sides fighting,
for the better half of me
I liked it alot!
~Danni~