Way to tell it! I really like your poem. It flows amazingly well, and I can definitely relate. Keep writing and take care. And thanks for the comment on mine. It means a lot.
> Kiesha

Good poem, nice rhyme and flow. Add more punctuation (.,;'?!) helps the reader know what speed you want it read at and gives more of a feeling.
~~Sweetie

I like that one the best of all its deep and emotional and it hits close to home for me

Very very good!!! keep up the good work

This is really good!! i like it a lot!!