My darkness

by Jonathan   Nov 26, 2005


My world is a very dark place
one where time and physics hold no sway
one where your senses are clouded by a darkness
the darkness of my mind
a place where your vision becomes opaque and all your hearing is turned to endless drops of water
or is it blood?
a place where the texture is course and gritty and the smell is the coppery scent of blood
for this place changes on imagination on a whim of the mind
as your mind takes hold
a black rain starts to fall across a blood red moon
you will become the darkness and the darkness will become you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Riffy

    Hey, yet another great poem! The last line was my fave...it's so strong.
    And who sed rhyme was important?
    You actually rhymed in that comment you wrote to me
    Luv Riffy
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great details and emotion keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    So powerful and emotional.... if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here. But great poem!