WOW Steve, a very powerful message, I have thought all that myself, but its wonderful to see someone put it on paper (computer) as beautifully as you have. I also love the style you chose.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Damn Steve! As usual, your writing is technically pure, but the message is also amazing. I love you style and only wish I were as talented as you. Great poem my friend.

Love the message the the style is cool too. i'm going to have to try it! you're a great poet and have deep meaning in your poetry!

~Jacklyn

Steven ,
What an incredible message throughout the whole write . I really enjoy and look forward to each of your new styles .
So much meaning and truth behind this poem , I just had to go back and read it twice . Your writings are always amazing ,my friend

So true! Beautifully written Steve, and so well put together.

Simon

You have a simple style which illustrates your points nicely, I liked the last lines in each of these stanzas, summing the stanzas most important message.

Steven,

As always, you have managed to create an excellent poem with a deep message within a rigid structure. Well done indeed! The use of punctuation is very efficient in pointing out certain themes and ideas. Again, well done on an excellent piece of writing!

Steven,
Well done my friend. You're really talented. Take care and always keep it up 5/5.