Nice Poem, with great detail, and only thing that i would say is, Its a great poem, but if u want your work to be really good try using a bigger vocab in your rhyming for example, hard and barred, perfect rhyme its not a common word, linger and finger are good also, but see and me, are too much of a common rhyme, so if you use a bigger vocab, especiall since that was in the first stanza, u can capture the readers mind quickly and make them want to read more, and it will be good so they will leave u a comment and vote, but excellent poem, keep it up, ttyl sometime

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~RiCo SmootH~

Awww...don't give up... i have some poems wrote on cutting also... feel free to look at my poetry. you're a good writer. very well expressed. keep up the great work. If you need anyone, I will always be here to listen.

Hugs,

Michelle

"rubbish at everything"? I thought this was wonderful. It reminded me of the countless times i sat alone in my room with a blade to my arm, but i couldnt do it. I wouldnt have started if i hadnt accidentally scraped my arm against those scissors. 5/5. gosh, it brought back memories