But because of the fact that i DID love you
nothing could make me see who you really were!

I loved this part because it's so true! Love is blind. It was a really good poem, but I do have some constructive critisism for you, some of the words you choose make your poem sound forced like this line-because it was always her you used to stir! Maybe try looking up better rhyming words to express your emotions at like rhyme.com or something. But please don't take this the wrong way cuz I love your poetry, you have great topics and they flow well. Keep it up! And I know I'm not perfect so if you have any suggestions for me let me know k.

Sorry I cant put up as good a comment as that ^ but I'll write something.
Thankyou for your comment, I see you really like my work, this is definately one of the better poems I have read (through all the crap people put here). I love the way you are so bitter about it all, so true. Keep up the great work.

Darkest Wishes
Matt