Hey
i love the poem, the words are good and it flows well. keep it up and smile, you can stop cutting, i have and you can.
love tara xxxxxxxxxxx

Good poem, nice flow and everything i like the metaphor u used in the last 2 lines, heaven and home well written, but in real life u should like cutting, its not a good thing to have in your life, but i hope everything goes well throughout your lifetime, ill ttyl

PeAcE OuT
~RiCo SmootH~

Ohhh hun...this poem is so sad, and so tragic. If you ever need anything, I'm always here. Beautiful poem though, you did a great job writing it.