It's good, but bland a little, I gave you a good. Check out one of my writtings, We almost have slight similarities

WOW! I love this. The imagery is spine tingling, the flow is flawless, and the ending....mind blowing! Great job~Holly

It's so good to see you back. I see you brought some poetry as well . Very nicely written my dear.. 5/5 none to less.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Such delightful detail, imagery, and language. You speak of other's talent whilst your own casts a worthy match to the most recognized poets of this sight.

You're a fine word artist, and I respect your participation in the matters of imagination. I would also welcome you as one of my Favorites.

Simply incredible... you are so talented, keep on writing because I really enjoy reading your poems.

Amazing. Honestly you never fail to deliver. Excellent job and it's great to know you're back. The word choice is exceptional as usual.
~Faith

I really liked this poem.
It could symbolize or be sort of an analogy for a lot. Good job! I love gore!

Wow, this poem is gay..who's the idiot who wrote this? he should be shot twice, then stabbed in the face again for being such a lame ass. Despicable. 1/5

WOW

I never really read a dark poem, but I love this one. I realize know that some of my poems have a dark tense to them. Thanx for sharing your thoughs.

This is a good poem. i'm also in the dark state of mind.

Original. Nice write.

Wow awesome poem very dark and...sharp....

Wow, thats deep

Heather
You're an amazing writer that's why I've always enjoyed your work.....Awesome....

love ya, Ann

The reason i put it on the life bit is cos noone can comment on the friednship poems on mine lol. I liked reading this poem, it was indeed very dark

The depth of your poetry is amazing.
I love how you place your words and the imagery and descriptiveness of everything.
MIND BLOWING!
~Wings

I just read ur devil poem, and this one i got the impression that you were kind of the devil in this one, till the very end when u told me that she took your heart...
however, i do love the use of such language. keep it up

Deeply horrid,eerie, and somewhat disturbing. i love and appreciate the vocabulary throughout this piece, very refreshing. overall, powerful words used to created intense and dark imagery. brilliantly penned. i truly enjoyed this one. 5/5

Kudos to the above commenter!