Very strong and truthful, but also bitter and almost bad in its anger. But still, the rhyme and flow was excellent, and the manner in which the poem was writtens showed the topic off to its best.

Good Writing!
beth

I know ur great from the inside,,,just believe in urself.. i can see it through ur poems..u can make it

I like this poem...i like the overall meaning of this poem and the way u presented it. thanx for comment on mine =)

Hey great poem and very touching..keep it up!!:)
excellent flow too.
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WOW I can relate to that,,,,, im adding you to my favs BTW

~Natalie~

Luved your poem, i luv the way u put ur feelingz on ur poems, thanx for commenting on mine

This was another amazing poem by an amazing poet. I would have to say there was alot of anger in this poem. I mean it sucks sometimes one little thing you do wrong you'll have friends hating you. That's like me I finally got my boyfriend (Shawn) that i love so much and we were hanging out on a saturday which i thought but instead we planned on a sunday and i told my friend on that saturday i couldn't go to the mall because i was hanging out with shawn. Now she doesn't talk to me because i broke plans with her. Now it makes me feel like a no body because now it makes me feel i have no friends and that i am a bad person. Maybe i am and this poem explains to everyone the good and the bad about friends and why they might hate someone so much. amazing job once again. maybe my story and your poem didn't match up but it seemed like a story to tell from a poem like this. keep it up keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wonderful work, you have so much talent.