The Heart

by last_petal   Nov 26, 2005


The heart
That i was holding
Can't breathe no more
So, I have to let it go

It seems like
No more air
To breathe
And blood to circulate

I was wrong
To let it go
'Coz there something in it
That I forgot

I forgot
That my own blood
Is the one circulating in it
What a fool I am?

To hold it tight
And not loose
For it not
To be in danger

I wish
I didn't hold it
So tight
Not now that i lost it

I lose
My own heart
In loving
Someone like you

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  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Good poem i liked it alot...JOc

  • 18 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    I dont know if i truthfully followed but it did have a good meaning! if you're wanting writing critic i will give it to you.. i would focus on a nie and easy flow not that i am any better but we could ALL do some good by focusing more
    -Rachel lots of love

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This was amazing at frist i didn't know what the heck was going on but i did after i read it more. but anyway i love the concept on this poem and you did an amazing job of writing this. keep it up. keep on writing. you have amazing talent. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhonda

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i like this poem, its so relatable and i like the rhyme scheme so i just had to give it a 5/5

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