Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i like this poem, its so relatable and i like the rhyme scheme so i just had to give it a 5/5

This was amazing at frist i didn't know what the heck was going on but i did after i read it more. but anyway i love the concept on this poem and you did an amazing job of writing this. keep it up. keep on writing. you have amazing talent. love always and forever.

I dont know if i truthfully followed but it did have a good meaning! if you're wanting writing critic i will give it to you.. i would focus on a nie and easy flow not that i am any better but we could ALL do some good by focusing more
-Rachel lots of love

Good poem i liked it alot...JOc