Great poem, its really good, its quite short but to the point and it catches the readers eye right from the beginning, I think if it was longer you could get some more feelings in there and make it better. But good job.
Check out mine sometime
love Tara-Kay xxx

Hey, great poem, really expresses ur feelings well. take care,
luv emmaxxx

Hey i really liked you poem...
keep it up... /peace Nikki

AWSOME! This is really good!!