Loved it! keep writing

Excellent poem! I absolutely loved it. keep up the good work, your poem was brill.
check out mine sometimes
love Tara-Kay xxx

I love this poem so much! :)

Yep , you never ciest to amaze me emma, i love you you like repeated the first line but it was different at the same time, lol that makes no snese, but you know what i mean, umm it was really good, it made me long for all those things, it made me long to just be free. perfect scores 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Its a great poem...i know exactly what your talking about...fairytales are nice until you realise your living a lie....awesome keep writing...

-Maisha

Excellent poem!!! it has a lot of flow to the overall context of the poem. thanx for comment on mine =)

Did i forget to comment? i thought this was such a brilliant poem, the idea behind it is complete genius. i like the way you have a lot of themes, your poems are so cleverly written yet still convey so much emotion. i respect that lol xxxx

Brilliant as always, ive read this in class earlier this week but manged to forget to comment im sorry, I really like the repition*sp?* of the first line, effectives and wonderful five stars all the way:P
Dang you quick at commenting gurly! lol thankyou for your continuing support love yeh

Your faithful reader
Jenn
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That was amazing, that really was, i loved that, so sad xx

I do imagine most of those things. But it's just a fairytale.. 5/5 none to less. take care : xx

*> : PainOfOne

THisi s really good and it's sad because when you're younger little girls dream of being in a fairytale, except you have that one kid who iddn't and that kid was me.

Wow! Really impressive!!

Awesome Peom :) *smiles* Michelle

Awesome....well written!! 5/5

Luvin this poem hun, its so good nd i luv da twist, n how its writter, u have a lot of talent but hun keep ur chin up, im alwayz here if u need some1....well done gorguzz xxx

I love this poem!...You are probably my favourite author on this site because I absolutely love each and every one of your poems. I really enjoyed the comments that you left on my poems because you saying that you like my work means a lot to me as i think so highly of you as a writer...Keep it up :)

Well all i want to say is that i love u all, and u have no idea how much all of ur comments really mean to me. honestly they mean so much. thanku all,
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I was just wondering if i could use your quote "words can be damaging" in one of my poems...is that okay?

Of course it is! that is fine :) xxxxx

Wow, I do imagine this every day. I hope this fairytale comes true for you. It's great to see such a good poem out of this idea, I love it.
Thanks for your comment.
*VioletRaven*