Woah, excellent poem. quite chilling, and sad, but really well written. i liked the ending. 5/5. take care,
xxemmaxx

It turned out great... me likey

Wow wow wow emma stole my words but its and incredible poem by all means just WOW5/5

Holy cow... you are an amazing writer... I hope you continue to write, because you're very talented. Great job!

Great poem has some great lines, 5/5