Wow. thats incredible. 5/5.
keep it up!

XOXO
Jaye

Omg, i am stunned! that was an amazing poem...just incredible. so origional, and the wording was excellent/ 5/5. well done,
xxemmaxxx

Super poem shows the indersision in life and the power of both light and dark, i like it. its very well written and flows well thoughout

Darlinq, this poem is amazing

That really kinda hit home......it was great

Woah thts really gud...
shows the conflict really well
5/5!
anywayz if u culd vote n comment on my poems id really appreciate it :) XXX

Very good. i like it alot. defenatly gets a 5 in my book =]

Oh my gawd! i was blown away with this poem! great 5/5! welcome to my favorites list! :D

Very buetiful!