Dad i deserve to know

by Spitfire   Nov 26, 2005


Dad see what you did ??

you torn me down

your broken me inside

but the thing is dad

i know you dont care

but then why do i care?

atleast tell me that dad

i deserve to know

dad i want to say somehting else

look at my wrist

see what you made..........

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  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    Thats really cool, deep, and truthful. I have troubles with my dad. Abuse. I've been told to forget him. Maybe its the best. Maybe you should do the same? But really this is great 5/5. Awsome.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Awwww..This is so sad, I'm lost for words ...I know how you feel, just keep you're head up and keep writting, because I love you're work. 5/5

    xoxoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Aw, this is really sad. :(
    I was looking at your other poems
    and it seems that we both have trouble's with our fathers.
    Hang in there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Great poem! take care and stay strong. i'm here if you ever need to talk to someone.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    See what you made me do

    My dadz a right P%$&* sometimes, well thats a lie most of the time.

    Great keep it up
    Dont keep your feeling bottled you should let it flow in writing -
    thats what I say luv B