I love it its so true plz rate some of my work

Wow! i really took ur poem to heart....i just loved it! thats exactly how i feel when this guy did that some what the same thing to me!!! wow ur a inspiration!!!!

Wow.. sounds like you where in love! ME TO! TWICE! i no how you feel! keep your head up... Great poem!
xoxoxxo

If i was u i would jus get ova him he sounds like a real jerk but its all good now i hope?!? well i hope you feel betta and ur poem was greatXXX trev

Hi tornn apart.....love ur niknam ...ilike ur poem a lot !!!!! i think its good wer ur poem is rite now....bye keap writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

That was really good. I like it a lot. I think it could honestly belong in anyone of those. But it works here too because we can all hear your pain. But yeah awesome poem!

Brooke

I really like your writing its every good keep it up! :)

Wow...
i am sorry that that guy "nick" is hurting you so badly
he sounds like a jerk
be strong

great peom

Wow!!!! that was written excellently and i know how you feel.. been through the same thing over and over again... plz read some of my poems.. its Neyney..
thanks
once again
great poem!

Tht was an awesoem poem....and im a 'nick' sometimes, well half the time to a few girls. but im also on the receiving end aswell so i noe were u r cumin from. i like the way u sed he probably didnt noe what he was doing, im not sure but wether it was supposed to be there, but was there a trace of forgiveness there? well i liked it loads, great expression of emotions, bravely dun too. im not gonna giv u advice, coz i dont no the story. if u want to talk on msn msngr, scottishnpaddy@hotmail.com
pat

I'm sorry to say that my real name, I know I call myself dwight, but.... , is "nick", but I hope I have never made anybody feel like you had to feel

Wow tht was good... loved tht poem so touchin and i could feel the pain ur goin thru so painful. *hugs
please help me on my poems... comment on them and giv me some tips thanx

This was really good... its pretty ironic same thing happened to me n his name was nick to...poor thing :( he was the 1st guuy i was wiv afta my ex bf of a year n i neva thought id be with anuva guy after dwayne but nick...was so nice urghgh he fukd me ova...likes my friend now

I really loved this poem... that guy sounds like a complete d**k and you dont need him...but i know how hard that can be... to let go... but anyway.. great poem i really loved it .. keep writing you have a special talent.
x x x Zowie x x x

Gr8 job with this one.. i found lots of new expressions and u made it look like a new style, not the usual old one.. i cud see u wer reli hurting... i reli dun think hes worth it.. lyked evrythin ther is 2 like bout this piece..
keep it up
NannO

Man, Nick most be a prick! I know how you feel. I knew a lot of people like that. More power to ya if you ditch him by now. Great work. I think this poem belongs in "broken friendships." Doesn't sound to sad to me. Sounds more like you want to kick Nick in places I won't-say-where. ^_^ Good work! Keep it up!

It belongs where it is. And it is so great.
as tony the tiger would say. It's greeeeeeeeaaaaaaatt.

I'm sorry that this happened

Guys suck don't they, just use them if they use you honey! At least you can write beautiful poems about the bastards, 5/5 and I wish the ratings went higher!
luv helen xxx

Great poem, i know exactly how it feels to be in that situation s im in it right now, keep up the good work xXx