I'm sorry this poem is so off the wall, I dont know exactly what I'm steering towards. or what I want to accomplish through it. any criticism would be good and I'd appreciate it.

What a beautiful relationship you have with nature. it is but a part of you that lives inside. sometimes it screams and you release its thoughts in your lasting poems. what encouragement you give me to come closer to the living outside of selfish humans

This is a really beautiful poem. Immediately the name forced me to read it as i am insanely in love with horses, and i was rewarded with a deep and emotional poem. Your imagery really captures the beauty and grace of the horse.

My favourite line was this:

Fiery burst from her soul but outer appearance was as calm as sleep

It perfectly describes how calm these magnificent creatures can be, and yet you know their fiery soul could burst free at any moment.

sorry, i've gone all passionate now...i may have to go write a poem myself.

thankyou for writing this truly wonderful oem, and i hope you write more, you do have talent.

xXx

You have alluring imagery & do not apologize for an off the wall poem, m' dear.. it sometimes produces more than expected, as in this poem. Nicely done, Nathan.

And I appreciate your honesty. Why was it so bland.

Anyhow 5/5

Love,Heather.

Wow! that was an amazing poem and you do have such vivid ways of describing nature. keep it up, you definitely have talent!