That is an awesome poem. I dont think i have read anything as good as it in a long time.

I really really liked it! keep up the good work! ;)

Wow!! great, awsome!! i love it.. great poem! makes me think..

Wow i love it great job keep it up xoxo laura marie

It sounds good when read whilst listening to lonly day by sistem of a down!!!

'Twas an ace write, mate. Keep it up!!1 :)

I really liked that! it was sad and thought prevocating, but at the same time exciting