This is a very real poem... you have written it well... very nice job... keep it up boy!

sammie

This is an excellent poem. It makes sense and it really makes you think. I love all of the words you used. Keep it up.

Tiffany.xox.

Nicely written - well done!!! it left me contemplating =)

Wow...great poem... I especially loved that last part because it hit home. Crushes can be horrible at times, but sometimes they are the best thing of your life. Well I hope you're alright, and keep writing these great poems =)