Relly nice! I give u props for letting him go if he didn't love u cuz i did da same and i know it aint easy but is ok... keep it up take care ciao...

I see in most of your poems you use a repetitive line...pull yourself away from that. I know there is certain rhyme scheme I use and I've found it hard to pull myself away from that though I am trying...however my ideas are different...But I know when you're used to a certain thing it's HARD to change...Hard NOT Impossible.

If you make your poems like...
I feel...
I feel...
I feel...
I miss...
I miss...
I miss...
you will eventually bore the reader. Though your ideas are good you could portray them differently...MY PERSONAL OPINION...simply a suggestion....Take Care ;)