by Jessica Nov 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
You never expect the unexpected |
Aw how sad...gr8 poem. sry about ur loss. 5/5 on the poem for sure! |
by Vanessa Lea
WOW. This is a great poem. Very deep. Unfortunately working in the oncology ward in a hospital, I see people in your situation all the time. |
This poem is very sad. I am assuming that you lost a son, and I am very sorry you had to go through that. |
I wanna cry :( awsome flow I loved it keep it up! 5/5 |
by kat
I like this poem specially the line: I also know we'll meet one day and you'll run straight into my arms. This poem is very powerful in words. The feeling of pain is very visible between the lines. I'm sorry this happened to you but God has reasons that sometimes we cannot understand! Keep writing! And if you have the time visit my work too. My lastest poem is: Beneath the stars. See you around! |