by Megadrive
That is so beautiful! the emotion... it is so sad:( it makes me want to cry so much! ur amazing at writing! Great job! |
by kat
I like this poem specially the line: I also know we'll meet one day and you'll run straight into my arms. This poem is very powerful in words. The feeling of pain is very visible between the lines. I'm sorry this happened to you but God has reasons that sometimes we cannot understand! Keep writing! And if you have the time visit my work too. My lastest poem is: Beneath the stars. See you around! |
I wanna cry :( awsome flow I loved it keep it up! 5/5 |
This poem is very sad. I am assuming that you lost a son, and I am very sorry you had to go through that. |
by Vanessa Lea
WOW. This is a great poem. Very deep. Unfortunately working in the oncology ward in a hospital, I see people in your situation all the time. |
Aw how sad...gr8 poem. sry about ur loss. 5/5 on the poem for sure! |