by sarah Nov 27, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
I wish to grasp just a portion |
by JJ
Not sure if I grasped the whole meaning of this...but anyhow great write! |
by Princess09
Another great one. Your style has feeling and emotion behind it never lose that!! |
This is wonderful.It is sad in a way yet has hope.I like your style somewhat abstract, ambiguous-it can be interpreted many ways.The last stanza is especially strong and moving.Great poem. |