Walked out the door

by Live, Laugh, Love   Nov 27, 2005


I don't know what to do
Do you know how hard it is not loving you
You promised me forever
Then walked out the door
We've shared so much
All that just seemed to fade away
I know i can't change what has happened
But the moment you walked out that door
Was the moment I will never forget
You turned your back on me
Like I was nothing but a pile of dirt
Why did you have to say you loved me
And even give me a ring
When you really don't know what love is.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Good poem!! i like the way it flows and you can feel your feelings. 5/5
    and thanks for commenting on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCount bodies like sheep to the rhythm of a war drumxX

    Another poem I can relate too

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hey you write awesome poems. It rules yeah yeah yeah thats the right word. RULES. But i can't really say i like the format all too much, I think everything is too close together, maybe you can seperate them with line spacing every few lines?
    I dunno. Your poems are so short. Ahh. Lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    I liked this one too, I liked the emotion, like I've said a couple of times, keep up the work

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow. that was great. i loved it keep up the good work. my favorite line was You turned your back on me
    Like I was nothing but a pile of dirt
    it was just so powerful.
    Emma 5/5

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