Aw hun, very cute poem, I loved it!, Can definetly relate in a sense, the feelings and emotions are there, hope you're okay hun, keep on writing & take care

I can relate, to most of your poems so far. Thanks for the read.

Wow.. this is a great poem... very emotional and pure... the only think I might've done with it is to give it a little more of a steady beat... but other than that it is fantastic... keep it up! very nice job...

Wow.. this is a great poem... very emotional and pure... the only think I might've done with it is to give it a little more of a steady beat... but other than that it is fantastic... keep it up! very nice job...

All guyz do that...somethimes i think that guyz have no heart...i don't know they just don't show their feelings...keep up the great job
5/5

Aww touching poem.. i know what you mean its really bothering when a guy tell you they love when they dont even kno what ther saying.. great emotions expressed in this poem.. and true experiences that you've based your poems on! keep up the awesome work you're doing great =)

--emotionless19*

Nice job hun i know what you mean been there had a guy tell me he loves me then found out he was messing around nice job 5.5

I liked this poem a lot 5/5 great poem, i like your style and words, really great, i can tell your talented too, thankx for the comment ttyl soon PeAcE

Awsome write, i can relate 5/5

Great job. Very good emotion.

I can really feel the emotion in this, and the repetition of "walked out of the door" really gave a strong image.
No offence meant by this but the part about being nothing but a dog I couldn't take seriously. Maybe change that dog part to something like "dirt" or "mistake." It's up to you, I just think it may be more effective.
Great job, keep writing.

Thanks for the comment on my poem, it's very much appreciated. And congratulation on being engaged; if it's love it's not too young, I got engaged at 16.

This is a great poem, alot of emotion.
thanx for the comments on my poems

Jacs
xxx

WOW!...I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. I LOVE ALL OF YOUR POEMS! I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM ALSO.

That was a great poem! it moved very well and it actually gave me goose bumps up my neck. very emotional and from the heart. good job.

Hey.. thats was reli gud.. heartbreaking, that is.. i reli enjoyed readin it.. i especailly lykd ur title.. eye-catching
keep it up
thnx 4 ur comment
Nouna

Wow. that was great. i loved it keep up the good work. my favorite line was You turned your back on me
Like I was nothing but a pile of dirt
it was just so powerful.
Emma 5/5

I liked this one too, I liked the emotion, like I've said a couple of times, keep up the work

Hey you write awesome poems. It rules yeah yeah yeah thats the right word. RULES. But i can't really say i like the format all too much, I think everything is too close together, maybe you can seperate them with line spacing every few lines?
I dunno. Your poems are so short. Ahh. Lol

Another poem I can relate too

Good poem!! i like the way it flows and you can feel your feelings. 5/5
and thanks for commenting on mine