BENEATH THE STARS

by kat   Nov 27, 2005


BENEATH THE STARS

Every night as the stars brighten the dark sky
I gaze at the thousand stars and wish up high
I always wish and dreamed for you to be mine
To hold you close to me & see our love shine

Now that it has happened I am happy as can be
Our home will be filled with our love they'll see
Every moment will be special like when we met
Every day spent with you I would never forget

Beneath the stars is a paradise for you and for me
Thousand stars giving light when darkness we see
Storms may come but don't be afraid for I am here
Hold my hand and we will wait until the skies clear

I love you and I will love you every day of my life
In happiness I am with you and in moments of strife
No one an take my love away from you and our son
I'll love you both endlessly even when my life is done

And when it is my time to go do not waste your tears
Remember how we have loved and all our happy years
As long as stars are glistening above this world of ours
Just look up and I will send you my love beneath the stars

November 26, 2005
Saturday
8:22 P.M.

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow hunni... this poem is amazing... the rhyming pattern is absolutely perfect, and it flowed well. Such a cute and romantic poem... keep up the writing hun, cause you got the talent that very few people have.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Hey chick, I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how u put the title of the poem at the very end. I like to do that too, as u can see in my poem that you commented on, also thank you bunches for that and thank you for caring about what ive been thru. Im gonna keep writing poems so keep checking them out and i'll gladly do the same for you. Keep your head up high.....def-5/5
    ~Jessica~
    *aka* Thug Baby

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