Hey chick, I really enjoyed your poem. I liked how u put the title of the poem at the very end. I like to do that too, as u can see in my poem that you commented on, also thank you bunches for that and thank you for caring about what ive been thru. Im gonna keep writing poems so keep checking them out and i'll gladly do the same for you. Keep your head up high.....def-5/5
~Jessica~
*aka* Thug Baby

Wow hunni... this poem is amazing... the rhyming pattern is absolutely perfect, and it flowed well. Such a cute and romantic poem... keep up the writing hun, cause you got the talent that very few people have.