Im so obvious

by lisa   Nov 27, 2005


I'm so obvious,
i cant keep it in,
just cause your here,
i begin to see it clear,

your like my shining star,
you always bring a light,
you never go far,
cause you want me to be alright,

sometimes you say things i don't want to know,
take me places i don't want to go,
hold me down and i cant get up,
still i love you so much,

your my best friend,
but i want to be more,
how can i let you know,
without letting this change.

[please comment id really appreciate it]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    Great poem! I've been there and it sucks. You portrayed that feeling perfectly! Mine turned out for the best and we're now together, so you never know what might happen. Good luck and keep writing!