I Have A Voice! ©

by LostInLife!   Dec 19, 2003


Again this is one of many poems i have wrote but still my personal opinion of this one is thats its not as good as my others so i would love to hear from you!!!

I Have A Voice!!

My first love it was, it still is you,
You and i should now it's true,
I never doubted in my mind,
That you'd be my true love that i find,
I really really want to be true,
And tell you how i'm feeling,
But will i hear the same from you?

When i say those words "i love you" it wint be fake,
So when i say them my life's at stake,
I wont rush to say it or expect it said back,
But if you say it'll do you mean it too?

You took me back i felt so glad,
I've now got everything i'd wished i had,
But i'm still a prisoner to my feelings.
Perhaps i should ex-plain i couldnt bare to lose you again.

So what i'm trying to say is hopefully ery clear,
As i've written right here,
Please dont egnore me,
And hopefully truthfull will you be.

...To be continued...... i fink lol

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  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i loved it. i gave it a 5 :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    very good "5" im my book keep up the good work luv rach