Journey called Life..

by Neo Castelino   Nov 27, 2005


Sometimes when you just feel free,
You must perhaps try to see.
The similarities of life and a road,
Each of us carrying our own load.
Moving forth with an anticipation,
Few with courage and determination.
There are stony forest on your way,
Amidst a glade far away.
You have got plenty of shortcuts for your choice,
To make you easy for your poise.
Few of which will lead you through,
Most mislead and that is for true.
Day and night you gotta walk,
Courage undaunted none can block.
Each step is a new beginning,
No one is losing nor anyone winning.
You can see chaos still follow some people,
Lost in the way with problems to tackle.
Many of them has gone astray,
Perspecting themselves to be on their way.
Complete strangers or friends to you,
Just few of them to pull your through.
Be yourself to trust the one,
You never know when the time is gone.
Unknown are we for where we left,
Still we move forth adrift.
A supernova you see today,
Could be a mirage can never say..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    You have a real talent for writing. You draw the reader right in to your poem. Beautifuly done.

  • Thats for your comment...i havent logged onto this site for so long....and i've stopped writing poem for a while... but i think i'll get back on track...all i need is inspiration

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice rhyming...I like it...lol..glad to see you here...keep it up...my friend...